How to Confirm a Competitor’s New Pitch

Sort what your reps heard, check what the rival published, hear its calls, then send reps a five-line update. How Mystery Demo takes those calls as a buyer.

A competitor’s new pitch reaches your team secondhand. A buyer repeats a question the rival’s rep asked, or describes your product in words your reps have never heard before, while the rival’s homepage still says what it said last quarter. Nobody on your side can tell whether the rival changed its story or one of its reps tried something new.

The answer is on the rival’s own sales calls. If two of the rival’s people tell a buyer like yours the same new story, it is no longer one rep’s experiment. Your reps need an answer to it this week, not when the website catches up.

Mystery Demo takes those calls for you. Its team books the rival’s real sales demo as a credible buyer, goes through each call the rival offers, and brings back the recordings with an analysis of what each rep said. The job takes five steps, and each one leaves you with something the next one uses:

What your reps heard, sorted into the four places a pitch changes
Whether the rival has published the new story, and since when
Recorded calls with the rival, and the deck it sent after them
A verdict on each of the four places, from the calls side by side
A five-line update in your reps’ hands

The Four Places a New Pitch Shows Up

April Dunford, who builds positioning and sales pitches for B2B tech companies, starts her pitch with the company’s view of the market. Only after that does it move to what makes the product different. A pitch built that way carries its market story in the opening minutes, so a change of positioning rewrites the opening.

Listen for it in four places. In the invented example below, Rival A sells software to property inspection firms. It used to sell speed, and now it sells reports that hold up when a client disputes one.

Where to listenWhat it tells youRival A beforeRival A now
The first three slidesThe problem the rival wants a buyer to start fromA tour of the report builderWhat a disputed report costs a firm
The question they open withThe pain the rival now leads with“How long does a report take your inspectors?”“When did a client last dispute one of your reports?”
The customer story they lead withWhat the rival now believes wins the dealA firm that finished reports in half the timeA firm that won a dispute with time-stamped photos
How they describe youWhere the rival now places you“A good tool for small teams”“Fast, but your reports won’t hold up in a dispute”

A new slide design is not a new pitch. In Dunford’s definition, positioning is how a product is different and better than the alternatives for a particular set of customers, and a fresh template changes none of that. If the four answers stay the same, the rival changed its look, not its story.

Your reps can tell you which of the four places they think moved. They cannot tell you whether it moved for every buyer or for one rep on one call, and that difference decides what you do next.

Write Down What Your Reps Heard

Start with the people who raised it. Ask each rep for the deal, the buyer’s own words and the place in the pitch where they heard the change, and write it down the same day. For each report, note:

Which of the four places it touches: the slides, the opening question, the customer story or how they described you
The buyer’s words, as close as the rep can remember them
The deal, the size of the buyer and what it uses today
The date of the call the buyer was describing

If your team records its own sales calls, search the recordings for the rival’s name. A buyer quoting the rival on your recording is one retelling closer to the source than your rep’s memory of the same moment.

You now have the reports sorted under the four places, and a picture of which buyers are hearing the new story. Every line on that sheet is still a retelling of the rival, by a buyer or by your rep. It tells you where to listen, and nothing yet about what the rival teaches its team.

Check What the Rival Has Published

Next, open the rival’s homepage beside last quarter’s copy on the Internet Archive’s Wayback Machine, which keeps dated copies of public pages. Compare the headline, the section under it and the customer stories, then check the other places a new story can land:

A comparison page about you, if the rival has one
Recent webinars and event talks
Decks or one-pagers it has posted publicly

Now you know whether the new story is public, and since when. A story on the homepage is one the rival has committed to in writing. The website still cannot settle the question, in either direction.

A homepage changes when the marketing team publishes it. A pitch changes when someone trains the reps.

The two move separately, and Dunford has seen the gap from the inside. A sales team that does not believe in a positioning will not use it, she writes, and in her experience it is not uncommon for sales to rework marketing’s pitch materials or ignore them.

So a new homepage does not prove the reps say it, and the reps can tell a story no page carries yet. Here is one invented case of a single change traveling across the three places a rival’s story lives.

Three tracks over one quarter for an invented rival: its sales calls switch from the old story in grey to the new one in purple early, the deck it sends switches halfway, and its homepage stays grey to the end.
Follow the purple: the calls tell the new story first, and the homepage never does this quarter.

In a case like that, a team reading only the website arms its reps against a story the rival’s reps stopped telling weeks earlier. Each source answers part of the question:

What you haveWhat it showsWhat it cannot show
Your reps’ reportsWhich buyers heard something new, and roughly whatThe rival’s exact words, or whether one rep said it or all of them
The rival’s website, now and last quarterWhether the new story is public, and since whenWhat reps say on a call, such as the question they open with
The rival’s own callsThe exact words from each person the rival puts on a call, and the deck it sendsWhat the rival tells a different kind of buyer

Only the last row comes from the rival directly, and even there one call is one rep. Dunford’s rule for early calls is that consistency trumps customization, so a story the rival has taught should sound the same from one of its people to the next.

Hear the New Pitch on the Rival’s Own Calls

Hearing the pitch on the rival’s calls is the one step your own team cannot take. A rival recognizes a demo request from your company, or gives it the generic tour, and the story you need is the one it tells a buyer it wants to win.

How the Calls Run

Before any call, the team writes the fábula, the buying scenario it brings to the rival: who the buyer is, what problem it needs solved, and which tools it uses or is weighing. Here the scenario’s buyer looks like the buyers your reps described in the first step. The scenario can list your product among those tools, so every person the rival puts on a call has a reason to say how they see you.

Then the team requests the rival’s demo through its normal front door and goes through each call the rival offers: discovery, the demo, the follow-up, each with whoever the rival puts on it. Every call is recorded, and every email and deck the rival sends is kept. The evaluation is real, because the team is evaluating the software for a client, and the only invented detail is which client.

The same scenario runs through every call, so a difference between two calls comes from the rival, not from a different buyer. The people taking those calls have sold B2B software themselves and know which question pulls a rep off the script. The Chief Mystery Officer, who runs the demos, puts it this way:

Chief Mystery Officer
Mystery Demo
“The trained story comes out in the first minutes of a first call, before the rep knows enough about you to change it. Later in the call they adapt to you, which is what a good rep should do, so the opening is the part worth comparing. We write down the question they open with, the first slide, the customer they lead with and what they say about the tool the buyer uses now. When the next person on their side opens the same way, that is no longer one rep’s style. The deck they send afterward tells you whether marketing wrote it.”

By the end of the calls, a new story has had three chances to show it belongs to the rival:

It is on the recording, in the rival’s own words rather than a buyer’s memory
A second person on the rival’s side tells it the same way
The deck or email the rival sends afterward carries it

When all three hold, the rival is teaching the story. It is still the story the rival tells this kind of buyer, and a buyer in another segment may hear a different one.

What Your Team Receives

Everything lands on a Notion board, a shared workspace with a page for each rival holding its recordings, transcripts, emails and the analysis written from them. The pages below come from our public example board, where the client and every rival are invented. A real project’s board is built from that client’s own calls.

Each rival’s page opens its analysis by saying what it rests on: the meetings, the minutes of recording, the documents the rival sent and the public pages the rep’s claims were checked against. That line tells you a finding about the rival’s pitch came from its calls and was checked, not from someone’s impression of a call.

The Expert Analysis section of a competitor page on an invented Mystery Demo example board: a Most Important Insights callout that opens with a line naming the meetings, the minutes of recording, the documents and the public sources the analysis rests on, followed by bolded insights about one invented vendor’s sales motion.
A rival’s page on the invented example board: the analysis says what it rests on before any insight.

Mystery Demo’s competitor messaging comparison is the service built for this: the story each rival leads with in the room, who it names as the alternative, and how it frames the category. On the board, it fills the messaging matrix, which sets four things side by side for every rival:

What it claims about the category
The alternatives it names
What it says against other vendors, you included
The subjects it skips

You run the three checks from the Database page, where every recording and transcript is listed in one table beside the documents each rival sent.

The Database page of an invented Mystery Demo example board: a callout saying every recording, transcript and collected asset is listed here, above a table for one invented vendor with each meeting’s recording and transcript, then the sales deck, case study, calculator and guide it sent, each with its type, format and link.
The Database on the invented example board: each call’s recording and transcript, beside the documents the rival sent.

Each call has its own row, its own recording and its own transcript, and the deck the rival sent after the demo is listed with them. For a pitch change, that table holds the whole confirmation: the calls to compare, and the rival’s own deck to check them against.

One rival costs a flat €499, everything included, and takes one to two weeks. To start, we need only the buyer your reps described in the first step, so bring that description to a short intro call with us. We will take the rival’s calls as that buyer and bring back every line of the new story with the minute it was said.

Compare the Calls Side by Side

With the recordings and the deck in hand, set the calls next to each other, one row for each of the four places. What counts as new is measured against what your team already held on the rival: the battlecard, last quarter’s homepage and any older notes. Here is Rival A again, every line and minute invented:

Where to listenFirst callSecond callWhat it means
The first three slidesA disputed report’s cost, the audit trail, then the app (02:10)The same three, in the same order (01:45)Matched, and the deck the rival sent repeats them
The question they open with“When did a client last dispute one of your reports?” (00:50)“How often do clients push back on a report?” (00:35)Matched: the same pain in the rep’s own words
The customer story they lead withA firm that won a dispute with time-stamped photos (14:20)A firm that halved its report time (18:05)Not matched: one rep still tells the old story
How they describe you“Fast, but your reports won’t hold up in a dispute” (09:30)“Quick to set up, thin on evidence” (22:40)Matched: the same place for you, in two wordings

Compare only what both calls had a chance to say. If one call never reached a place, mark that row open rather than matched. Across the four rows, the result comes out one of three ways:

What you findWhat it supportsWhat reps get
All four places match, and the deck carries themThe rival is telling this story on purpose, to this kind of buyerThe full update, now
Some places matchThe change is under way, and some of the rival’s reps have not picked it upThe lines that match, with the rest marked open
The new story turns up on one call onlyIt is one person’s version so farNothing yet, until another call repeats it

Rival A lands in the middle. Three of the four places match and the deck repeats the new slides, but the second rep still leads with the old customer story. That fits Dunford’s account of what a sales team does with a positioning it has not bought into: it reworks the new story, or keeps telling the old one.

Send Reps a Five-Line Update

Reps facing Rival A next week do not need a new battlecard, the page of notes they keep on each rival. They need five lines:

Their new story, in one sentence a rep can repeat
The question to ask before the rival’s rep asks theirs
Your answer, in words a rep would say out loud
The proof you show, on screen or in writing
The claim to stop making

Here is Rival A’s update, invented like every line on the image. The top half shows what changed and which calls each change was heard on, and the bottom half is the part reps carry into their next call.

An invented example pitch change update for an invented rival, Rival A, in property inspection software: four places its pitch changed, before and now, each new line with the calls it was heard on, above a five-line update for reps. Every line is invented.
An invented example: Rival A’s changed pitch, place by place, and the five lines reps get.

The last of the five lines is the easiest to skip, and it does the most work. Against the old Rival A, “twice as fast” won deals. Against the new one, it plays into the frame the rival has already set.

A buyer who heard Rival A call you fast but thin on evidence hears your speed claim and supplies the rest.

The claim that beat a rival’s old pitch can prove its new one.

So the update replaces the old row on your battlecard instead of sitting next to it. Send it where reps already read, and mark each line with what it rests on: two recorded calls and the deck, or one call so far. Write it the day the recordings come back.

Only One of These Steps Needs a Buyer

Four of the five steps need only your own team: the reps’ notes, an hour on the rival’s website, the side-by-side comparison and five lines. The third needs a buyer the rival wants to win, on its calls.

We take that step for you at a flat €499 a rival. Describe the rival and the buyer it is pitching on a short intro call. The new story comes back in the rival’s own words, from each person it puts on the calls, beside whatever deck it sends.

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